r/OCPoetry • • 12d ago

Just Sharing If Only You Knew.

Into the dark,
Into the deep
I proceed..

To weep for you, for us
and everything that was.

Into the ether,
I wait for you..
so patiently.

I'd give you mine
at a moment's notice
If only, you'd take what's yours.

Tear me to pieces
Rip me apart..
And discard of me
entirely.

Only to rebuild me again
refreshed..
With a subtle whisper
and a fleeting kiss.

Embrace me
love me, touch me,
As you see fit
I am your willing
participant.

Call my name,
Reach out for me
in the darkness.

If only to remind me
of all that there once was.

all that we lost
And everything in-between.

Can't you see —
That I was made for you.

If only you knew..

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1wtks5s

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/1wz1ugu

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u/autumnspring89 6d ago

It was beautiful. Everything I write turn into a self centred gloomy depressing work. So I will try to take inspiration from your work and write something that is not 'I' or 'Me'. This comment also started revolving around me shii. Sry the poetry was very good.