r/ArtFundamentals • • 7d ago

Despite ghosting and using my shoulder I am still committing incredibly amateurish mistakes. Should I restart DrawABox again?

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u/Individual-Mud-903 3d ago

Draw a box is meant to look like a mess. The drawings there are supposed to be exercises and practices, nothing more.

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u/ArticReaper 5d ago

Side note, whats that drawing pad? Ive never seen one with ruler lengths on the sides :0

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u/PitangaPiruleta 4d ago

It's a very basic 80-page sketchbook I found at a local store! IIRC they are used mostly by engineer students, I personally only used the ruler lengths to draw the horizon lines. If you search for graph paper or ruler paper you should find similar results

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u/NewAd5862 6d ago

Doesn't the lesson say "do your best, move on"? If I was reviewing your work, I'd tell you to watch out for your lines, ghost them more, and move on.

Don't enter the cycle of grinding unnecessarily, please.

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u/PitangaPiruleta 5d ago

The lesson does say that, but comparing my attempts to others, I know i should not be missing the dot as hard as Im doing, specially on the last box on the bottom left. Thus Im asking if I should be repeating this exercise until these mistakes disappear or restart

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u/NewAd5862 5d ago

You get the point of the exercise, you see the mistake, and I assume that you'll work on it in the future. As I said, if it was me reviewing your work, I'd tell you about it, but I wouldn't see it as a reason to ask for a re-do. Others may disagree. I'd also tell you that those lines are showing some lack of confidence, more than anything. Either way, go forward.

Don't compare yourself to others, especially on Drawabox. There are people going through the course that have done it before and want to refresh their knowledge. There are people that are great with their lines but are trying to improve on construction, and so, their homework will look amazing compared to someone that's just starting.

When I did it, I remember people submitting amazing work for their animals and textures. It happens. But your road is your own. So keep going!

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u/Brettinabox 6d ago

Did you do the previous plotted perspective? It shows you how to do it. Rough perspective you should be going back and extending major lines to see how they reach the horizon (I like to use red ink for that)

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u/PitangaPiruleta 5d ago

Yeah, I did plotted perspective a few times. I usually do the red inking after Im done with all the boxes on a page, this is the second page of rough perspective but I got frustrated from failing right at the end

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u/Brettinabox 5d ago

Its definitely not as easy, its sorta the first exercise that isnt a direct do this this and this. There is a margin of error. Remember that we all have been there but what makes you great is that you do not stop.

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u/Brettinabox 5d ago

Even plotted can come with it's own challenges, its so important to do the 50% rule so that while you do learn things, you also experiment with how to apply it artistically.

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u/PitangaPiruleta 5d ago

Your plotted perspective looks incredible! Thank you for the help!

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u/EffortIllustrious382 6d ago

If you're having a hard time visualising and understanding the goals.

Just use a ruler for a session or two to make the boxes.

Sometimes it's really hard to break old habits

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u/PitangaPiruleta 5d ago

I appreciate the advice, but isnt using a ruler for this be against the spirit of markmaking and lesson 1 in general?

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u/Prestigious_Boat_386 5d ago

You can train marks as a warmup. If your issue is observational train observation. Focus on the problem you feel is holding you back right now.

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u/mooncrosser 6d ago

It's takes a while to get better. After lesson 1 you'll be doing the 250 boxes challenge. In other words, you'll draw a lot of lines - you'll notice the improvement there. And guess what. After that you'll draw a lot of lines as well. I've been drawing for ~ 5 months and I still occasionally miss my marks.

Based on what I see and my limited experience, you are going a bit slow, resulting in the wobbly lines. Your priorities are, in this order: 1. Make the line smooth by executing the line faster. 2. Hit the target dot. If the line is a bit short or a bit long, it's fine. 3. Stop perfectly on the target dot.

For now focus on 1 and 2, only when you figure these out start working on 3.

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u/prescape 6d ago

Keep going and you'll eventually stop seeing those mistakes