Did I cook or not?

[u/Salt_Song9838]

As a producer sometimes, its hard to gauge if anyone ever likes you beats or not, I just need any feedback.

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[u/FeelDeadInside]

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/FeelDeadInside]

Thanks, I appreciate the comment. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/WonderfulYam4690]

you cooked

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/WonderfulYam4690]

Thanks, glad someone likes it. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/WonderfulYam4690 → u/Salt_Song9838]

you'd get more views as a ''type beat'' rather than a remix or official video remix

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/WonderfulYam4690]

just upl;oaded the typebeat too now, if you could like please, https://youtu.be/FFePcH7CybY?si=CYvB5mHuHomTnQvK

[u/WonderfulYam4690 → u/Salt_Song9838]

dont hope reddit will do the work for you bro let the algorithm do the work

[u/prodbyphxntom]

was listening at 20% volume, had to turn it up just to confirm if i was hearing it right. i fw this bro W shi

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/prodbyphxntom]

Man, this comment made my day. If you coul help me get this beat some traction, would appreciate it. Youtube Link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k?si=qFDS9sLrEnnBmme7

[u/prodbyphxntom → u/Salt_Song9838]

ima def checkit out

[u/Maninthahat]

Banger 🔥

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/Maninthahat]

Thanks, I appreciate the comment. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/Necessary_Camel8587]

Heat

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/Necessary_Camel8587]

Thanks, man. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/lilith2k3]

I'm listening on phone speakers and it sounds ok so far.

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/lilith2k3]

Thanks for commenting, glad you like it. If you could like the beat so video can get a bit of traction, I would appreciate it! LINK: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/lilith2k3 → u/Salt_Song9838]

Liked and commented.

One question though: Is the 808 intentionally squashed so hard? It might be genre convention but I don't know 😂

Otherwise nice execution!

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/lilith2k3]

Thank you so much!! Yes it is the vibe as drill/dancehall vibe

[u/ratfooshi]

Yes

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/ratfooshi]

Thanks, I appreciate the comment. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/whatupsilon]

you cooked

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/whatupsilon]

Thanks for the comment, glad you like it! P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/whatupsilon → u/Salt_Song9838]

I mean yes I liked it bro but not that much lol

[u/treehann]

I like the beat, seems like good writing, though I also can audibly hear it clipping

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/treehann]

Thanks, I appreciate the comment and I fixed the clipping. P[ease help me get this beat up, on my youtube link: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/eatmyshorzz]

Good stuff but why the keyboard cam lol

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/eatmyshorzz]

Thanks for commenting, glad you like it. I hadnt used obs studio in a while and forgot how to turn camera off. If you could like the beat so video can get a bit of traction, I would appreciate it! LINK: https://youtu.be/7rZyCGNPG5k

[u/StudioatSFL]

Could develop musically a bit more but a solid B+

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/StudioatSFL]

Thanks, what do you mean? I can't add more as I need to keep it simple to allow room for the rapper?

[u/StudioatSFL → u/Salt_Song9838]

There’s always room for more! I’m joking. But like about 27 seconds in. Taking the synth we’ve already heard up the octave is nice but a subtle descending line with something like a soft piano, Celeste, plucky synth, whatever would be really interesting to the ears. Something playing maybe straight quarter notes or a slightly more square rhythm to counterbalance the very cool drum rhythms.

My ears want something new as that verse develops and the energy builds. Since the rap is rhythmic but not melodic there’s a huge opportunity for a nice counter melody to the main synth drone line.

Of course it’s just a suggestion and maybe it’s something you do like 1min30 into the song in the next verse.

[u/Salt_Song9838 → u/StudioatSFL]

Okkk I get what you mean. ill experiment with it!