I fucking hate this webcomic

[u/crispyflesh]

First of all the art is extremely ugly and even uglier when it’s trying to replicate and anime style. The plot is unoriginal as hell but even with it you can create something good so why did the author make it so shitty?

I read until the 16th chapter hoping for something to tell me that it was going to get better but it didn’t and it sucked. The main character’s a weak crybaby with an abusive uncle that’s like nuts or whatever and he uses vr as an escape. Idk how old the mc is but the dialogue is super corny and not realistic at all, bro met a guy and two days later tells him « sometimes i wonder what is hidden by the masks that we create to protect ourselves » and like in a situation it could’ve been good, great even. But not when it’s said by a character drawn with weak ass squiggly lines, basic color, wrong proportions and badly drawn emotions.

Stop being so whimsical with strangers my god, you’re being cringe right now. And the characters are badly written as well, the uncle’s really just here to make you pity the mc, and i literally dont care if i just read to the 16 chapter and whether or not it makes me a plausible judge because everything sucks, form the dialogue to the writing to the story.