r/OCPoetry • • 2d ago

Just Sharing Before I Am Lost. - silen

Nothing but a fleeting consciousness,

Slowly devoured by a vortex of chaos.

.

.

Who am I?

.

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Who… who am I?

.

.

Please… just tell me once,

Before I am completely lost.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/HNPQWpR6Xh

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/o4kc0BzgLN

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u/BellaWritingHere 22h ago

This is really relatable even though it's short and doesn't have lots of details. I keep wondering the same and sometimes I get so far as to answer "I'll never really know".