r/Screenwriting • • 2h ago

FEEDBACK Looking for feedback on my script before a festival submission

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Logline: When an impoverished orderly attempts to sell his kidney to a billionaire, his delivery becomes an odyssey of thefts and double crosses.

Format: Feature

Length: 101 pages

Genres: Comedy, crime, drama

Hey, I'm trying to get this ready for a festival competition that I'll be submitting to in November, so I'd love to get some eyes on it!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1s9S9WyH37CusttGrC_6IN4k_pMcQK_2A/view?usp=sharing


r/Screenwriting • • 4h ago

RESOURCE 1980's Horror Scripts on Script Hive (Part 1)

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There were too many ones I wanted to include so it's going to be split between today and Wednesday and a reminder that featured scripts do not require creating an account to read/download:

More from the Script Hive database (account required to read/download, but it costs zero dollars):

Posting Schedule:


r/Screenwriting • • 6h ago

INDUSTRY Horror Competitions

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I know, I know. Competitions are this. And that. Yada, yada, yada. 👻

With a lot of us fine tuning horror scripts this time of year, curious what some of the better comps are for horror features? Whether it be film festivals or online.

Looking to prep out a plan for 2027 and what to target (as part of a broader approach).

Grateful for any suggestions/war stories.


r/Screenwriting • • 18h ago

LOGLINE MONDAYS Logline Monday

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FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

Welcome to Logline Monday! Please share all of your loglines here for feedback and workshopping. You can find all previous posts here.

READ FIRST: How to format loglines on our wiki.

Note also: Loglines do not constitute intellectual property, which generally begins at the outline stage. If you don't want someone else to write it after you post it, get to work!

Rules

  1. Top-level comments are for loglines only. All loglines must follow the logline format, and only one logline per top comment -- don't post multiples in one comment.
  2. All loglines must be accompanied by the genre and type of script envisioned, i.e. short film, feature film, 30-min pilot, 60-min pilot.
  3. All general discussion to be kept to the general discussion comment.
  4. Please keep all comments about loglines civil and on topic.

r/Screenwriting • • 21h ago

NEED ADVICE How do I start a new scene in the same location?

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So I’ve been doing screenplays a little over a year and a few months. I’m writing a story about two people stuck in an elevator and 40 minutes have gone by.

I have:

INT. SHANGRI-LA HOTEL. ELEVATOR

Do i transition to:

INT. SHANGRI-LA HOTEL. ELEVATOR
30 minutes later