r/Screenwriting • u/TheVividAlternative • 2h ago
FEEDBACK Looking for feedback on my script before a festival submission
Logline: When an impoverished orderly attempts to sell his kidney to a billionaire, his delivery becomes an odyssey of thefts and double crosses.
Format: Feature
Length: 101 pages
Genres: Comedy, crime, drama
Hey, I'm trying to get this ready for a festival competition that I'll be submitting to in November, so I'd love to get some eyes on it!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1s9S9WyH37CusttGrC_6IN4k_pMcQK_2A/view?usp=sharing