Thoughts?

[u/pure-kudos]

The mix is pretty terrible and I feel like it sounds kinda …. Christmassy or something? Maybe it’s the chords on the synth but anyway, curious what the people think. Been a few years since I fucked around with logic

[u/Adept-Panic-7742]

I like the concept. Obviously polish the mix up. I also think give some more breathing room on the vocals and let the chords drive the build up a little more to give more impact when the vocals kick in again. Particularly after that first drop, rather than the sidechained vocals being quite dominant, relax them a bit maybe?

And yeah the hats towards the beginning feel too rigid and need a bit of groove or something.

Not very expertly described but hope you get my meaning.