r/breakcore • u/Usual-Doughnut-549 • May 05 '26

Feedback Need feedback/suggestions on what I've made

this is already the 3rd project out of 9 in this style that I have almost completed and I want to know the opinions of others if this sounds good, what can I add here and etc

and sorry for the quality, fucking obs never worked good on my lappoop

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u/ChosenUndeadFire May 05 '26

Feedback: you made a dope ass track Suggestion: make more dope ass tracks

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u/Broad_Education4882 May 05 '26

You’ve unlocked breakcore, congratulations, keep it up 😎😈👾

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u/wankyshitdemon69 May 05 '26

Certainly got the chaos on lock down. Good stuff

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u/monotekdm May 05 '26

It’s a nice piece of a possible track. Also for future reference all WIP’s must be at least 1:30. You get a pass for now but keep it mind when you post again :).

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u/Usual-Doughnut-549 May 05 '26

okay, I'll mind that in future

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u/ligma-eye-balls May 05 '26

Melodies lost in mix

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u/Usual-Doughnut-549 May 05 '26 edited May 05 '26

yeah, I've noticed it. probably too much sidechain on it from kick

edit: also noticed that it's too quiet

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u/BornConsideration783 May 09 '26

genuinely fire, experimenting would be good cause I see a fuck ton of potential in you

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u/Tight_Function_6209 May 05 '26

The hardstyle kick feels kinda out of place

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u/42duckmasks May 05 '26

tons of hardcore kicks in breakcore he just wanted to overuse it, nothing wrong with that

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u/zerozeroseis May 05 '26

Finally, breakcore

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u/falllenangelzz May 05 '26

try to use different breaks!! (from my own experience i would try to clean up the mix, all the samples seem to have long tails which bleeds into the next drum hit making unnecessary loud, (in my opinion) of course if you wanted it to be that way then your all good

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u/reoweee bpm over 300 May 06 '26 edited May 06 '26

Really nice!

Also just saw on your profile you are from tashkent :0 I visited there two summers ago, it was really nice :) great to see some central asian breakcore talent!

Your track reminded me a lot of Super Sour Candy by Sophiaaaahjkl;8901, very similar kicks!

Do you have a soundcloud or bandcamp to check out more of your music?

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u/Usual-Doughnut-549 May 13 '26

i have soundcloud and telegram channel. primarily i upload my music in tg. soundcloud is cursed_catl and tg channel username is @cursedcatl_flp

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u/cascade_sparse May 12 '26

Good stuff. Thanks for sharing