r/comic_crits • u/indira0003 • 1d ago

critique my comic

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I'm teaching myself how to make comics, and I'd like to know if my comic is easy to understand, if anything is confusing, and what story you get from it.

Spoiler: Don't read the story below until you've looked at the comic!

After finishing work, someone discovers that their bicycle is missing. They find the cut bike lock on the ground. Then they hear a noise behind them and try to figure out where it's coming from.

Does the story come across clearly? Is there anything you would improve to make it easier to follow? Do you have any advice that could help me learn and improve?

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u/NicholasIvins 20m ago

It reads pretty clearly, but I feel it could use an additional panel between the first and second of him parking or locking up the bike.