r/comic_crits • • 1d ago

Color shading variant feedback

So I'm making comics (mostly for fun). They are all made on paper rather than scanned. On paper, they look ok (I don't know if it's the texture or the white that is not bright on paper, but I feel something is off once on screen. So I tried making this shade/color variant to get different results and I would like to get someone else's opinion on these attempts.

The last panel is the original,
Thank you

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u/Psychedelic_Muck 1d ago

The first two make me think that were seeing a memory/something that has happened before. I have no idea why, maybe the the sepia gives an old school feel and the same goes with grayscale... I like the third and fifth the best :)

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u/Turbo_Tequila 1d ago

Thanks for the feedback! now that you say it, I totally see what you mean by this flashback feeling.

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u/NicholasIvins 23m ago

I think page 4 looks the best, but I'm wondering what the reason is for the blue panels. Is it a different time or place in those panels?