r/learnart • u/grrrl666 • 10d ago

Critique/Advice

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Hey! I'm working on this, if you have any feedback in color, composition, drawing or anything is more than welcome! I would like to keep improving it but I need some opinions, thanks!!!

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u/lizzytheoctopus 8d ago

This makes me so unbelievably uncomfortable, I love it! Maybe some highlights on the eye goo?

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u/__50pe__ 10d ago

It's gross but in the awesome way. Maybe you could add a few more defined eye veins, make a few stand out a little more? I've not had pink eye but I have really sensitive eyes and used to suffer with insane hay fever, I'd always notice a few relatively large veins in my eye when they were inflamed or when I'm tired.

I love how wet they look, again gross, but in the good way. Add more crust!

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u/grrrl666 10d ago

great advice thanks!!!!! I think it could definetly look better like that

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u/grrrl666 10d ago

YES IT IS. what an awful way to start the day, and thanks <3

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u/k_from_HyperDraw 10d ago

technique is good 👩‍🎨
the subject ... could be interesting for an eyewash ad, or similar hygiene products

One [next] area to improve? the Lashes.

  • make them more defined/individual