r/learnart • • 1d ago

What needs improvement? in terms of proportions and angle, keeping the pose and camera exactly the same.

I don't need to add anything, said everything in the question, keep the pose and camera position same what need to be changed? I love this pose and illustration.

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u/Life-Reputation1836 17h ago

Take this with a pinch of salt but I feel that the shading on the staff? thing could be improved, it just stands out weirdly to me.

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u/rellloe 1d ago

Rotate the hand in the front a bit because you have tangents with the hood

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u/Imaginary_Extreme_14 1d ago

I said I don't want to change the pose and camera. proportion is something I think have an issue

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u/artsanddraughts 23h ago

You can’t ask for feedback, then say you don’t want to change anything. Either take the feedback or just share the piece and don’t bother pretending you’re asking for feedback.

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u/Imaginary_Extreme_14 18h ago

i clearly said in the question that I don't wanna change the pose or camera. so when i say angle i mean where is the hands are the destination and the pose should be the same but if the body or arms (joining the hands) feels like it need to change, how the arm joins the hand, body should turn more towards the camera or have a more of a profile angle.... something along those lines.... i don't want to figure out the pose... thing is if i chance the pose it will be like as if I have not conquer this pose rather created a new... which i can do but it will be extremely unsatisfing and will stay at the back of my head until i make it look right.