A very specific pet peeve I have that also made me realise what makes a fic REALLY good to me
Okay, bear with me because this is weirdly specific and Iâm not sure Iâm going to explain it properly đ«Ș
Iâve realised that one of my biggest pet peeves in fic is when the dialogue/conversation doesnât flow. Like, when it doesnât actually feel like a real conversation. The pacing feels off,banter or there are huge blocks of dialogue that feel like monologues, or the characters are basically just taking turns delivering information.
Iâm one of those readers who basically experiences a fic like a movie playing in my head. I can hear the voices, imagine the facial expressions, picture the characters moving around, etc. So when the dialogue and scene construction are really good, the âmovieâ in my head jut kinda play?! Everything moves naturally from one thing to the next. Thereâs a rhythm to it.
But when the dialogue is awkwardly paced or there isnât enough description/action around it, my imaginary movie basically starts like stutteringâŠ.Like I canât quite picture how the scene is supposed to move from A to B.
And I LOVE when authors sprinkle in those little descriptions during conversations. Not huge paragraphs of exposition, just things like what someone does with their face, how they move, where theyâre looking, someone interrupting, pausing, leaning against something, rolling their eyes, etc. That kind of âblockingâ makes the whole scene so easy to visualise.
I also enjoy plenty of fics where this isnât particularly prominent, so Iâm absolutely not saying that a fic is bad if it doesnât do this! I read and enjoy plenty of fics where the dialogue isnât this kind of immersive. But when an author does have this particular quality, I realise I enjoy the fic SO much more.
Iâm currently reading A Soft Place to Fall by amomori, and they are doing this SO well. I barely have to consciously imagine anything because it just plays out in my head.
And now Iâm wondering if anyone else knows exactly what I mean ?! đ„č
If you do, PLEASE give me recs for Drarry fics where the dialogue/conversations have this really natural, flowy, almost cinematic quality.
Iâm pretty open to everything but I generally donât read anything under ~70â80k words. Otherwise, throw whatever you have at me!
I know Rookie Moves has this quality for me, and I feel like basically everything Iâve read by lettereddoes too. There are definitely other fics Iâve read where Iâve had the same feeling, but of course my brain is refusing to come up with any of them right now đ
Also, if youâve read A Soft Place to Fall and know exactly what I mean by this, PLEASE tell me Iâm not alone in noticing it because I feel like Iâm describing something incredibly abstract đâ€ïž